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Jesica
Jesica Engle
United States, Pennsylvania, Bloomsburg

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Exposed

Your fingers press too deep
Your breath raids through my skin
burning insidious smoketrails
into every corner of
My soul rolling in my mouth,
but you penetrate my eyes,
sink into my blood
roil up my stomach
and sail into my mind.
Naked feels so good when
I'm spread bare inside your hands
your omniscient fingers
left their imprints on my sands.

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precar Comment by: precar - 2008-01-30 14:14
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Some lines evoke really poetic images as I read. My favorites:

my soul rolling in my mouth

and sail into my mind

I'm spread bare inside your hands

left their imprints on my sands...I like that choice of last word, and I'm glad you distinguished sands from sand.
lucy Comment by: lucy - 2007-11-09 15:23
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Minus the first sentence and the last word- which works somewhat- I LOVE THIS. mm mm just perfect. The expressions of lust, want, need. mm mm
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