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kyrasdaddy
Robert Cano
United States, TX, San Antonio

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Unknown (need help with that)

A thoughtful word, action,
In a world of pain and suffering
A hope and a dream,
Thriving through insecurity,
The cries of destitute
Heard, and responded to
The tears of the lonely
Caught, and wiped away forever
Burdens felt by those crushed
Carried by a brother who loves
Sorrows, past hurts revealed,
The sister who listens…

…and holds you close

“I’ve been there,” he says;
“I feel your pain,” she replies,
And you know it to be true,
For their eyes hold no lie…
“I’m so alone,” you tell me;
“I fear everything, everyone,” you confide,
Fear not, for I am with you,
And I will hold you…I am here…
And so you release yourself,
Purge yourself of those burdens,
Cry yourself to sleep,
And wake up tomorrow…

…and can smile once more

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Joni Ramos Comment by: Joni Ramos - 2007-11-09 16:09
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How about "Cocoon"...I know this might be off from the deeper layers of your poem, but I'm thinking of the title in a more poetic terms. Cocoon is part of a life cycle as we all know of a "butterfly", a protection before one frees itself to the outside world, so to speak, in metamorphosis...a new beginning from the pupa, spinning the web of mass to hide in one's insecurities, fears, etc. before one's transformation to a new beginning....anyway, I read that way, my own poetic mind....thanks for sharing....smile.
Lilaxani Comment by: Lilaxani - 2007-11-09 03:51
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Words from an Emissary. Giving hope in the darkness when there seems to be none. Making one know they are never alone. Thank you, I needed to read this. I really love the rhyme. "cry yourself to sleep and wake up tomorrow...and smile once more" Great way to end this. Wonderful. You could always name it "Humanity"
WLC Comment by: WLC - 2007-11-08 12:59
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Robert, I can help you with that unknown title. How about: Release. Great poem of "giving over" to another, of giving and receiving what is needed to "get through." I liked this immensely. Wanda
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