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| a good look into the inner you; excellent; revealing. |
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Comment by: - 2006-02-16 05:52
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| I like this poem great stuff, i can't wait to have a look at your others |
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Comment by: - 2006-02-15 23:49
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| I agree with Alien. This poem has great potential but it needs to be revised. I couldn't follow the first two lines. One great thing about this poem is that it gets better as it goes along. |
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Comment by: alien - 2006-02-15 07:49
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This has great potential and I appreciate the sentiment of the piece. It's the great thing about writing that allows the writer to peel back the layers of his inner feelings and personality whilst still being able to stay behind them :)
I think you have great potential as a poet :)
I'd like to help you if I can :) |
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Comment by: - 2006-02-13 22:13
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| I think this is an excellent poem. I mean, I felt it. There is one thing though, 'scared', did you mean 'scarred'? And, that is all that I see for the moment. |
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"Small Voices, Big Confessions"
Can you hear them? They??re everywhere. Voices that can??t be contained by the boxes around our work, our homes, our families. Voices that shine through the cracks in our everyday lives. Voices with tales to tell.
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