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deathdealer
Richard Duggan
United States, NC, Jacksonville

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Just a dream

Her beauty is overwhelming yet seems unobtainable
How can I get her to notice me?
She moves like an angel
Her scent fills the air like spring
There is no way she could be mine
I try to get near
She seems so far away
Suddenly I awake
That fragrance, it's her!
Beside she lays
I stroke her hair
My angel smiles

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Dakota Comment by: Dakota - 2008-02-04 10:34
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Nice to be in love - and to share it with us. Yeah, I like the ending too.
Short but sweet.
criosa54 Comment by: criosa54 - 2007-11-09 14:04
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I love how this one ends!!!!
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