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Your imagery and choice of words move the poem along beautifully. I just like the sound of this poem, the words and syllables.
"Every note
a nude silhouette
balanced on raw passion."
I love that. |
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| I can't answer that for you Stefan. I don't paint, I just look. And listen. And write. |
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Comment by: Stefan - 2007-11-24 17:31
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| I've never once felt "raw passion" while painting. And people talk about it all the time. Why don't I feel it? |
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| I like what I think you're doing here. But it being the first work of yours I can't say anything very useful. But it is fascinating to read someone translating musical sound in to words. The words seem to fuss nervously. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. |
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| with such constructive comments you don't need mine...i enjoy watching the reactionary synthesis in mercymanic's poetic core...april and joni absorb the wholeness of your text, each reflecting the essence of art in its melodious entire. |
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