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write12b
cheri edwards
United States, illinois, rantoul

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dance with me

crackling leaves blaze yellow,
burn orange hot like autumn sun.
cool azure sky glints through
branched windows. sun rays jump
jaunty like jitterbuggers jiving
on concrete dance floors.
flickering lights give way to
moon full bright. dark skies clear
chill limbs stiff. trees lean left
reluctant pressed by winds
foretelling frigid coming.
morning rises, warms, heats hot.
dance begins again. leaves flutter,
burn red, falling brown. trees sigh,
bare-limbs forlorn. fall dance over.

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krademacher Comment by: krademacher - 2007-11-11 17:39
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a very haiku feeling romp. I liked the alliteration.
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