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DreamerLady101
Luz Delisse Chevres
United States, Florida, kissimmee

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Song of the Bodies

At night
When the moon is bright
Our bodies touch
And the music starts.

Fingers glide over body
Whispers a melody
A love song
Telling the story of two lovers
That started with a kiss.

At night,
When everything's quiet
Their bodies join,
Creating a rythym of their own
While the moon watches with envy
Their love play, their love song.

A soft melody forms in her mind
When their bodies touch.
Music notes take form
A symphony of lips
A harmony of whispers
That talk of endless love.

An orchestra of feelings
Followed by strings of passion
PLaying the sweetest song
A song only her lover can hear.

A song only he can feel
By her touch
A song only he can sing
When their lips meet.

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endlessone Comment by: endlessone - 2007-11-16 06:29
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hey, very nice poem (song?), the words have a nice melodic ring to them... I have to point a little mistake though, in the last-but-one paragraph, the last line, I think you meant only ;)
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