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crackednotbroken
Identity Crisis
United States, Texas

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Before Remember

Now the knowing
Such a heavy moment
Always to adore
Marking painful longing
Craving more, never less
A master pretender

Expect any moment
The last kiss, the end
Pretend no longer
While knowing, no avoiding
Too soon to remember and
Smiling sadly to follow

But this caring desire
Not to let go or stagger
Advanced obvious ending
For now forget remember
How much, how far?
Falling fast and hard to never

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Matthew Eduard Abuelo Comment by: Matthew Eduard Abuelo - 2007-11-23 06:38
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The flow of this piece is well done. The thought behind it is also engaging.
wattsred Comment by: wattsred - 2007-11-15 14:45
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it rolls off my mind's tongue. im a sucker for imagery and flow. namaste :)
menoh Comment by: menoh - 2007-11-10 08:59
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it flows nicely, and is very wide in how many interpretations can be gotten from it. nicely done.
xemoxangelx Comment by: xemoxangelx - 2007-11-10 08:45
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this has a really good structure to it,i think it flows really well. nice work x
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