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The Afghan
Everyone was running horrified to the mountains to hide into the caves, not knowing what was happening, when one of the Afghans shouted out loud, “The Americans!!“
Then everything went dark.
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Whew! Thirty-one words that pack a punch.
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haha
Sorry, I just read Bill's comment and it sent me running for the hills, trapped in a web of laughter.
*I'm sitting in a cafe, reading all of these stories and I often wonder what those around me are thinking, a young woman sitting alone, laughing on a random whim.*
Congrats. on the 31 words! |
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Comment by: Kowalski Online- 2007-11-11 04:35
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Ah yes, the Americans, the bull in the china shop.
"Mission accomplished" in 31 words. Reminds me of George Bush - except you really did accomplish something. |
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| Dammit, the Americans stole the damn light too. |
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