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Stephie
stephanie anderson
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United States, TN, Clarksville

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Ice Storm

Thick-ribbed ice, he hangs, hovering,
Molesting every limb--
Frost-bite-ing;
Sleet’s sleek firmness solidifies,
Dig-ing into every curve of its captive,
Cling-ing to the traces of her every bend,
Bear-ing down with his un-Shaken strain
Into her skin.

Ice-builds on wood,
The twig and crown succumb
To the force of the hoarfrost--
The sharp bitterness of the cold, withstood,
Remains un-Refrained.

The will of the sylvan deity gives way,
She shudders, fawn-ing,
To the tree-god, as he brings her so easily in,
Violently; Then,
Discards her hard--
To the ground, un-Thawed and fall-ing.

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phillmag Comment by: phillmag Online- 2008-02-26 05:41
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Stephie, you work words well. i think the hypenated words give them the alternate meanings you intended.
i chose this poem, because i also wrote a poem entitled Ice Storm. it's very different (suprise).
aprilmayed Comment by: aprilmayed - 2007-11-10 15:37
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Are you sure you have never lived in North Dakota before? You really know coldness. I love the innuendos of the last stanza. You are the queen of the pretty sex.
tristanmmang Comment by: tristanmmang - 2007-11-10 15:22
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Amazing. The freezing conceits are so damn cold. I love this personality: ice, and its manifest in nature, sex and death. Almost like a fallen idol, its beautiful to worship so dark.
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