 |
 |
 |
| |
Requiem of Love
Heartbreak catches it by its neck
Slowly taking its breath away
With each push of Heartbreak’s palms
The blood vessels seems to snap away
Heartbreak unlocked its filthy hands
Dropped Love to its knees
With an evil smirk
Love on bended knees
Struggled for the air it breaths
Satisfied with the outcome
Of Love’s lost
A shrilling laughter explodes
From Heartbreaks throat
With one hard kick to the gut
Heartbreak made love buckled
Twisted over and then fold
Now laying there with eyes wide open
Love pleaded to the mercy of Heartbreak
Heartbreak has no heart
The pleasure of killing love
Was love enough
Tears of pain flows freely from love
As it accepts its fate
It prayed for a painless death
And laid there defeated
Heartbreak has no pity
With one dark blow to the head
Love was left there
Dead
Completely
Want to comment on this Poetry?
Sign up to Edit Red and you will be able to comment on Poetry and get access to: Upload your own stories and poems, get readers and their feedback, promote your work...
|
 |
|
[Back to top]
|
|
|
|
Using the word as the antagonist... I believe the word "completely", is not needed in the last line, but they are your expression...
Glen Yumang Manese |
 |
Comment by: - 2007-12-07 14:07
|
|
very interesting perspective
it follows the order of things exactly in this writing |
|
|
| Definately an interesting way to look at it. I liked the way you turned such a painful emotional experience into a personified, slow motion battle. |
 |
Comment by: anitak - 2007-11-11 00:38
|
|
| Extremely well writtem very different from so much stuff I have read, its trul unique and trult beautiful. NICE |
 |
Comment by: sadon - 2007-11-10 23:04
|
|
Oh my god,I never read something like this ever and they way u've put ur words together,Gorgeous! I love the battle between the two,it's something so common ...the tragic ending.This poem reaches out to my heart!
So many of us are victims of evil heartbreak! sigh* i better stop,i could go on. wonderful** |
| 1 |
|
 |
 |
 |
|
|