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Comment by: solwolf - 2008-09-06 13:31
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| Very visual. Like a dream. |
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| This is one of the interesting pieces that I've read on this site. |
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Hey, I owe you. Not often someone's work moves me to write a poem in reply.
Thanks,
Dave |
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| You made my day with this. Both because I agree with the sentiment, and because I'm not the only person out there who sometimes answers a poem with more poetry. |
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Love is a window
pane-less
an invitation
rsvp at will
you forever take hold
but the rim crumbles
beneath gossamer footfalls
you're collapsing
into schism's chasms
looking up, light
blinding
looking down, blight
lining
you expire
in ecstacy. |
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