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TuckerWhite
TuckerWhite
United States, CA

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McCann's Shore

Sitting a stone's throw from the past,
the last one in a line of traditions.
Next to a gaping tunnel,
stamped 'Built In 1911', under a now
gimped RailRoad track.

This was a boomtown long ago; River barges dropping off mail and memories,
miner's on horseback, Ladies in hats, mutts and
mules, trains rolling past from Chinese labor, among
Indian Hosts.

Now it sits, vacant, but for me and the roaring river,
resting on the ferry, that travels shore to shore,
waiting to take someone across,
watching down a road of memories, life's long history.

There's a bridge being built, by a mouse and a modem
using all modern technology,
A reaching arm, just to connect me.

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InHizImage Comment by: InHizImage - 2006-08-19 09:00
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"Sitting a stone's throw from the past" ~ That grabbed my attention on the "spoiled upload" and made me want to read more. I wasn't disappointed at all. You followed through with this piece and painted a beautiful picture. Thanks for sharing. Great read.
hulshizer Comment by: hulshizer - 2006-02-15 12:33
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I loved this. It was very descriptive and I love anything that connects us with our past.
denisedee Comment by: denisedee - 2006-02-13 20:33
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Well, this one sure seems to resonate with everyone else.

I'm not sure about that last line.
waxseal Comment by: waxseal - 2006-02-13 11:02
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I like this a lot - put me in mind of Sandburgs 'Chicago'- I think the only thing it needs is maybe a line that has a sensory emotion in it - a smell or a sound - something to think about anyway - nice job.
Dave Morrison Comment by: Dave Morrison - 2006-02-13 07:26
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Wow - this is really great, not only the images and descriptions, but what's underneath. This is my favorite Tucker piece so far.
Nice work!
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