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deathdealer
Richard Duggan
United States, NC, Jacksonville

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Access: Public
Comments: 2

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Beautiful Creation

Skin porcelain white
Pure silk to fingertips

Reddish brown hair
Frames her beutiful face

Eyes, oh those eyes
Mezmorizing honey brown

A figure of amazing grace
Perfect femininity

Absolute beauty
Created by the hands of GOD

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Dakota Comment by: Dakota - 2008-02-04 10:33
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Man you have it bad, and why not.
Nice to read such raw emotion.
Personally I don't think God had anything to do with it - but hey,
we all have our own way of viewing the world.
criosa54 Comment by: criosa54 - 2007-11-12 20:01
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Hmmm is this one about who I think it is? Its pretty!!!
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