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Joni Ramos
Joni Ramos
Philippines, Manila

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Sundae Parfait

my sky, dressed up today
her skirt, creamy éclairs
of white chocolate mousse

sorbets of frozen sunsets
rainbows of
golden parfaits
raining cherries

no more dire predictions
threatening skies, deep purple indigo
severe forecasts,
indignant thunderstorms

frappe of stars
reflections in your eyes
tempting my Mimosa

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tristanmmang Comment by: tristanmmang Online- 2008-09-19 09:20
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Haha very nice... I love poetry that misxes sensations and perceptions.

I strangely thought of the board game Candy Land when I read this, you have surely activated some strange nostalgia in my head. Well done!
niceandy Comment by: niceandy - 2007-11-12 09:14
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Delicious language!
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