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Geminirose1980
Jamie Hall
United States, WA, Bremerton

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Do you ever wonder about me?

As I sit here and think of you

I wonder many things.

Everything about you,

The physical,

The mental,

The spiritual,

The emotional you

Is what I want to know.

Also I wonder

How do you feel when

I walk past you?

Do you think

I'm good-looking?

But most of all,

Do you ever wonder

About Me?

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sadon Comment by: sadon Online- 2007-11-13 03:47
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cute!
short and sweet.
simple and yet says alot.
there are no vivid descriptions of everything,and still in these few words,alot has been said!
good i say,infact real nice.
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