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7thSon
Seventh Son
United Kingdom

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Crystal Gaze

Lets have a little wander
Into more pleasant lands
Where things are not so fickle
And we don't have to make great plans

Let the bluebells tickle
Let the buttercups cast their gleam
Let us sit awhile
By the meandering stream


Lovely lush green meadows
Birdsong can be added
To create a magical scene
With nothing to cast dark shadows
This is just the start
Of a wonderful dream...........


Crystals are our influence
Or maybe just the theme
To wander freely it may seem
Is just a recurring dream

The third eye is now open
With every glance it casts
Maybe somehow, somewhere
This dream could last and last

The crystals could be magical
Or do they live in the past
Our dreams should have no endings
We have no need to wear a mask

Our lives are what we make them
With influence, theme and dreams
Today will make a difference
With a little fear and perhaps a tear
It will all become… Crystal Clear.

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sarra Comment by: sarra - 2007-11-16 09:07
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Simply gorgeous!! You made many valid points and put them together into a lovely poem.
RedWitch Comment by: RedWitch - 2007-11-12 14:19
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Very nice imigary in this piece, seems to be a 'Crystal' night!!
Wendy x
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