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We travel in the pale dawn light
The lavender moon casts no shadow
Golden mist swirls
As we glide silently
Lying amongst silken cushions
Languid, sleepy eyes
Looking deep into each others minds
We connect in passion
Your thoughts surround me
Take control of my senses
Fill me with pleasure
Our fingertips touch
We orgasm
Silver skin turning blue
Then slowly white as we calm
Tantalizing tastes of each other
Our minds link in this world of calm
Eat with me this purple peach
As the crystal domes of pleasure get closer
On this world of happiness
Without pain or horror
We will live in harmony
Leaving the cruel world we came from
A distant memory of our past
Gone for ever in the mists of time
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The lavender moon casts no shadow
Golden mist swirls
Eat with me this purple peach
Silver skin turning blue
Then slowly white as we calm
I liked those, It was interesting the use of colors in your poem it made it so very colorful, it was very imaginative and touching.
