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Dianna59
Dianna Petry
United States, WV, Montgomery

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Sometimes

Sometimes I lie awake,
Pretending that you're here,
Sure that I hear you whispering,
Sweet nothings in my ear.

Sometimes I allow myself to dream,
Of moments I long to share,
I can almost hear you breathing,
Feel your fingers in my hair.

Sometimes I almost cry,
When I think of what we've missed,
The time we've spent apart,
The nights we should have kissed.

Sometimes I question destiny,
Is there really some big plan?
Why is it so hard to touch you,
As only a lover really can?

Sometimes I think I'm crazy,
To look for love at this late date,
But if you reach for me tonight,
You know I won't hesitate.

Sometimes I lie awake,
Fantasizing in the dead of night,
Sure that you're coming soon,
To make my world feel right.

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Dianna59 Comment by: Dianna59 - 2007-11-16 05:15
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Thank you. At times I seem to lose the day to day stress by self-reflecting and daydreaming. Putting it into words seems to free my mind to move on to other things. I'm really glad you liked the subtlety of the words. I cannot seem to use the blantant language some writers pen so easily.
7thSon Comment by: 7thSon - 2007-11-16 03:45
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A poignant piece with a number of meanings I liked the subtlety of the words.
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