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anitak
anita Kalyan-paul
United Kingdom, Northampton

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Dedicated to my Father

To My Dear Father

Through troubles time you guided me,
You gave me understanding and your love,
Your patience true, through all I did,
Was like a gift sent from above,
Never once in each hurdle did you give up,
Although so many mistakes I made,
I drained you, hurt you, so many times,
Yet every fall you still forgave,
You are my rock, my supporter true,
In me you did believe,
I know I caused you so much pain,
And your heart I did deceive,
But you have been an angel true
My saviour and my guide,
I wish you father all my love,
For in you I can confide,
You are so much, my teacher in life,
I look up to you in so many ways,
I will try in life to make you always proud,
And you will be my guru for all of my days.

Lots and lots of love
Your loving daughter
Anita

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yinka Comment by: yinka - 2007-11-13 04:37
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nice.just enuf to get your old man crying!
sadon Comment by: sadon Online- 2007-11-13 03:33
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wow. This was really good. I've never had a father,but still I like the flow of this poem and it makes me feel...looked after for! great job!
venturpreneur Comment by: venturpreneur - 2007-11-12 23:45
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Beautiful. I can relate.
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