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alf7a
K.P. Eckles
United States, Nevada, Las Vegas

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Star Of Old

Old of Age,
young at heart,
time he knew out lived most stars.

Stars that illuminate the night sky,
shining like the morning sun,
giving warm, inviting hope.

Hope broken on his loved ones faces,
showed his time on Earth would soon be end,
but his life in Heaven would soon begin.

Begin without fear,
without regret,
at peace he passes.

Passes while singing,
swing low, sweet chariot,
coming for to carry me home.

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sadon Comment by: sadon Online- 2007-11-13 03:32
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Makes death seem like a wonderful episode! Its very positive,i see a old man,who's lived his life. its very simple and comforting.
I kinda thought the ending was a bit abrupt though,if you squeeze in another few lines it would be great! But what you've written isn't bad at all :)
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