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Nora
Nora Gruenberg
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Cheryl's Challenge #4

Call it less than real
And beyond impossible--
Pierce a hole in this hallucination.
To have it be an
Unconscious race
Results in nothing but empty space.
I suddenly remember:
No good comes without
Grace.

Maybe you heard me say,
Yesterday has gone away.

Down to the smallest detail,
Remembering the beginning might
Enhance the feeling that I left the house naked tonight.
Again.
Maybe that reoccurring dream
Says more about what is than what could possibly have been.

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Nora Comment by: Nora Online- 2007-11-21 06:43
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Dear George, I can only imagine it's because you have too much respect for me to imagine me running by you nekkid in the moonlight?
GeorgeFellini Comment by: GeorgeFellini - 2007-11-21 06:40
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George says hi, miss Nory, you sure do paint a pretty picture. Run that by me nekkid in the moonlight thing again, please. I get those dreams, too. But It's never you running past, nekkid in the moonlight, Nory.

Thank you fer your imaginative words, miss Nory.

GeorgeF
Cherley Comment by: Cherley - 2007-11-16 13:00
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Poetry is so much to so many, but the reason there are so many different forms of it is because there are many different views of it. I enjoy writing poetry too.
frees340 Comment by: frees340 Online- 2007-11-15 19:30
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Im no poetm but this was good stuff. If this was a short story, it would be very interesting. The whole thing is vague, which is good. And its so insightful.
venturpreneur Comment by: venturpreneur - 2007-11-15 05:54
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Great imagery and honesty. Good.
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