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| Gorgeous. Nothing else to add. |
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| "and plague its human flood" the idea of contagious endemic emotion is truly overdue in literature. |
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| I still love this one. This is one of my favorites from you even though it's also one of your shortest! I love the alliteration of "wind's faint wails." I also love that you equated heartache with a fly. There is something so true about that. |
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| Another fine piece. The imagery really stands out here, 'summer’s rusty screen doors' and 'Heartache/chased around like some swift fly' grabbed me. Attaching a man-made invention of pollution to something emotional like heartache is imaginative and works well on a metaphorical level. Good stuff, as always. |
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