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aprilmayed
April Michelle Bratten
United States, North Dakota, Minot

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The China Tree

I gently collected his body,
turning him, nuturing him,
upon my leaves. (And he did leave,)

to flee this summer's bed
which undressed its canopy,
tempering the eaves
of this delicate coverlet.

A tiny rain-drip, dips the sepals,
unfurling the brush
on his hesitant leaf-curl--
and still, steadily,
each portal continues to fill,
fill, then fold.

Morning steam,
he is now only a whisper of condensation
upon my legs,
but I,
I can see past the dew.

A blush, hush,
quietly ascends upon my bower,
as he has clustered,
expanded my blood for far too long.

Am I but his parasol,
his greedy shade,
a lone vigilante
enduring the harshest of winters?

I insist he partake of these fruits,
for they have emerged
from the womb of my branches,
a gift, a vow, to he,
who used to feel like home to me.

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Wildefriend Comment by: Wildefriend Online- 2008-05-07 04:55
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This is a poem which whispers through the soul delicately. Reminds me of the moods of Kenneth Patchen's love poetry--beautiful!!
Dakota Comment by: Dakota - 2008-02-04 06:29
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You write beautiful, interesting and moving poetry. I really enjoy reading your work and seeing how you write, it is inspiring.
I am moved. D.x
vampirina Comment by: vampirina - 2007-11-16 14:09
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I enjoyed reading this, April. The metaphor unfolds well throughout the piece and drips feeling at all the right times for the reader. 'I insist he partake of these fruits/for they have emerged/from the womb of my branches' is visually and symbollically great, helping to draw the stanxa and poem to an effective close. Good work, April.
theorionfive Comment by: theorionfive - 2007-11-13 17:20
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This is a very intimate set of verse - I really like the picture of your friend forever (or maybe just for now) rolling down your body and all - it feels like the old "dirt on the shoulder", per se. But the imagery also seems to be one of purity - I can picture vivid photographs of the liquid you described, almost like a spring day.
Stephie Comment by: Stephie - 2007-11-13 16:25
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This is probably my favorite from you....well, if that is possible. This has such amazing imagery and your metaphors are so strong. I love your "Aprilisms" too :)
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