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| The quest we are all on - finding our purpose and our place in this world. Your wording is just awesome! |
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| As a rough time is what pushed me from my normal into this site I can totally relate with such verses. Again your words are poignant and deeply expressive. |
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I agree with the rest of my peers; the few words you select resonate and illustrate the struggle.
Lovely work |
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Comment by: tcbswan - 2007-12-12 02:33
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well done--the shortness of each stanza really gives the piece a choppy tone, you can feel the struggle going on. and rhyming at that--nice read.
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Comment by: anitak - 2007-11-21 21:37
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| Excellently written, makes you understand and feel the despair, a feeling I guess we all can relate to at times, although on different levels for us all I guess. You write so well, your flow just comes naturally and makes it easy to read. |
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