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I find myself confused.
Looking into a life I do not know.
Have I sold my soul?
I need to know.
I see in front of me everything I wished for.
Yet I feel incomplete.
Have I sold my soul?
I wake up in early mornings.
Can’t fall back asleep
I toss, I turn
I just don’t know.
I am surrounded by many.
Yet I feel alone.
I am numb.
Confused
Dazed
Where have I gone?
I do not know.
I want to be me.
I want to be free.
Can I get back?
Lost
Puzzled
Have I sold my soul?
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I can relate to such emotions, such as waking up early hours unable to sleep again. You have expressed your thoughts and feelings really well in this piece. Very good.
I believe a comma would help break "Yet," and slow the reader to think in your verse... also, the line "Have I sold my soul", I think would be better if "Have I found my soul", just a bit of advice... Of course, the title is "Confused"....
