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Isabelle9407
Isabelle Dowlin
United States, New Hampshire, Claremont

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stroy i had to write for school

Some stories I had to do at school
These are stories from a topic sentance at school. I have like four or five others but they are in a folder at school for my teacher to correct. These stories may be short but that is because we only have seven minutes to write. So here they are there are 6 of them.

1) Topic Sentance was: Foolishness is bound up in the heart of a child. Story: Foolishness is bound up in the heart of a child. It really means that in every heart of a child is foolishness. Foolishness can be good sometimes, but at places like school foolishness is not a good thing. If you act foolish during school it can result in punishment. As in sitting in ime out. So foolishness can be good, and it can be bad. At home if you are foolish at home, but not in other places. So my point is in evert heart of a child there is foolishness, I will admit that. They need to learn to control it, and know were foolishness is allowed, and not allowed.
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2) Topic Sentance: If I had a hammer I would...
Story: If I had a hammer I would build something. I would build a clubhouse for me and my little brother. Maybe then we would get along better. I would let him help too. Only if I had a hammer, wood, and other stuff. If only, if only. Always if's, and not any I have's. So if I did have a hammer I would build a wonderful clubhouse for me and my brother. It would be our place to hang out, and just talk. If only I had that hammer.
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3) Topic Sentance: Letter to my brother George in Iraq
Story:
Dear George,
Hello, how are you? Im fine. Are you ok? When will you be coming home? The family misses you, and we are worried sick about you. Be careful in the battle, so that you may come home. We are all praying for a miracle to happen. We are praying for the war to end, and for you to come home. Mother crys for you, and so do I. I hope you get this letter soon. Well things at home are still the same, but the house is quite without you. I have been doing good in school, and will be getting a report card soon. Mother has been making lots of new things for the house, and has done alot of redecorating. So I guess its not really the same anymore. Well hope you come home I miss you very much. We all love you deeply, and miss you. xoxoxo
From you little sister,
Isabelle

------- ^This was just a story for school and not real^----
3) Topic Sentance: Determinedly, the old gander willed his wings to pull his tired body up into the early morning sky to follow his flock south fot the winter.
Story: Determinedly, the old gander willed his wings to pull his tired body up into the early morning sky to follow his flock south fot the winter. It was starting to get chilly out, which meant it was almost going to be winter. I was watching the leaves fall from the trees. As a cold breeze flew past. Our leader of our goose group waddled over to me and told me it was time to get ready to fly. I started to pull my body up, but fell back down in my nest. I was so tired ad weak from our encounters we had with wild animals. I felt just so tired and weak........ (I did not have time to finish it sorry)
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4) Topic Sentance: When I leave GCCS(Greater Claremont Chistian School) I want to be remembered for the way...
Story:When I leave GCCS I want to be remembered for the way I acted, I wanna be remembered for the kindness I had towards other people. Or the way I was friendly towards other people. I don't wanna be remembered as someone mean or anything. I wanna be remembered for the nice way I acted. Just to be remembered for the positive things and not the negative things. Leaving GCCS with people remembering me is one wish anyone could wish for. Also knowing I'm being remembered for that, can make anyone happy.
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5) Topic Sentance: I think it is imporant for young peole to be aware of the decicions their govermeant is making because...
Story: I think it is imporant for young peole to be aware of the decicions their govermeant is making because it is impoartant. The goverment makes the laws, and all of the decisions. The goverment also includes the president. So it is impartant for young people to be aware so they can show their opions, and so when they are old enough to bote, then they will know what to look for. They will know the decisions the goverment is making so that if they don't like the decisions then they can show their opion. Also vote for someone thats gonna make better decisions. Its also important for young people to eb aware so they know the new decisions and/or new laws. I think that is why it is important for young people to be aware of the decisions their goverment is making.
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This is all i have sorry. I will have next weeks, next friday. I will have my really good ones in the folder at school posted on here soon. So plz tell me what you think of the ones I posted on here, and which one u liked the best. Please and thank you.

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