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When you feel like a frog
at the edge of your dumpster,
wait.
flies will come.
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hi Mark..
this is freakin awsome.
really one of the nicest use of 16 words ive seen.
if your intention was to suggest feelings produce the physical reality around us, youre godlike.
bravo.
T
Funny. You have an intersting voice. Even though its a different format, it reminds me of haiku because you manage to put a lot of meaning into a few lines. These small poem would work well in a small collection. Funny, meaningful...nice stuff.
