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EnigmaticSoul
Paul Gilbert
United Kingdom, Tyne and Wear

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The Embrace of Silence

Fading away
Diminishing rapidly
Far from my sight
Your voice starts to fade
Haunting
Distant
Vague
I feel the embrace of silence

As confusion intensifies
Frustration multiplies
And fear is amplified
Realisation has arrived

I am alone

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StarRobin Comment by: StarRobin - 2007-11-20 10:21
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Great implied images with this piece. Definitely makes me imagine someone either sitting in a dark empty room or standing silently on a barren peak. Bookshelved.
IFall0ut0fGrace Comment by: IFall0ut0fGrace - 2007-11-16 15:02
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wow, that's like really powerful. and deep down everyone knows exactly what you mean, i know i do.
wattsred Comment by: wattsred - 2007-11-15 09:28
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deliciously alone...some great mental pictures you have here...im jealous :)...namaste :)
vickihowery Comment by: vickihowery - 2007-11-15 06:02
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Alone - so many of us can relate and understand . Your emotions bring us in closer . Always feel so much for your writing .
esthermorey Comment by: esthermorey - 2007-11-15 05:32
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Kudos....
Yes.
Very Nice.
Relatable.
I always do enjoy reading your writing. It is like you are in my head sometimes.
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