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Litlover
Litlover
United Kingdom, North West

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Your touch, soft at first
Your skin warm against mine
So delicate, so innocent
Why does it hurt?

Your words, felt at first
Your thoughts entertaining mine
So genuine, so true
Why do they not ring true?

Your heart, needing to love
Your soul reaching out toward me
So enriching, so consuming
Why does hold back?

The need to feel, to think, to love
Overpowering, bringing me in but
Not keeping me safe
Why is it not enough?

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InHizImage Comment by: InHizImage - 2006-07-27 20:46
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This is just how I read this, but I think it speaks mountains to victims of abuse who go on to get married. Nothing takes away that pain, but there is always an attempt.
Great write!
Comment by: - 2006-02-15 02:41
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this is very beauful. It made me happy and sad at the same time, quite a feat. ;)
Comment by: - 2006-02-14 09:17
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To me, this poem speaks of a love and a loss. How it is never enough. That is what I gather from the ending lines. I think this is very well done; I could 'feel' the emotion.
Ithastobegood Comment by: Ithastobegood - 2006-02-13 07:09
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Wow, i really like it! You make me feel like i want to love!
I am entertaining the thought!
shaft Comment by: shaft - 2006-02-13 06:32
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I find emotions impossible to write about so good effort. I have to work with actions and let the emotions be communicated with them. Having a cig always helps concentrate me and they say its bad?
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