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Louise
Louise Davidson
United Kingdom, Belfast

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Love Song

I carry your heart with me
For forever and never
And everything in between
My heart beats out a song
And a rhythmical pattern
Even I have never seen;
Like the keys of a computer
I let it tap searing, soothing words
That burn and bruise against my chest
Letters that spell you and me
And pay no attention to the rest.
I can read the heart words in the mirror
Backwards and forwards, pink-
Purple and impossible to hide
I feel them burn and smile
Hoping that maybe you see them,
Because I only wear them on the inside.

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Stephie Comment by: Stephie - 2007-11-16 09:46
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And this reminds me of Cummings :) You really do have a wide range of style, which I like, it keeps me guessing and wondering what you will do next.....You have so many unique phrases in this, you seem to always possess the ability to take something old and turn it into something new for me.
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