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Jam1son33
James D'Ambrosio
United States, New York, Amityville

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Rainy Day

I can’t find my dog,
I can’t find my frog,
I can’t find my snake,
He’s not in his log.
I can’t find my cat,
I can’t find my hat,
I can’t find my shoes
Last left on the mat.
Outside it rains,
Outside it pours,
Outside is where
I found them all
Wet and muddy,
Scattered about.
I did not fuss
I did not shout, instead
I watched them play and smiled at
How my cat made a boat
Out of my missing hat;
How my shoes caught the rain
For my frog to sing and bathe,
While my snake slithered down
A rapid gutter stream;
And all this time my dog was asleep,
Snoring away in his own wet dream,
So barefoot, I leaped
From the door to the street
And danced away my troubles,
Without an umbrella,
Puddle after puddle.

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Sharazad18 Comment by: Sharazad18 - 2007-11-19 20:08
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It's like Shel Silverstein's poems, but it's not silliness for it's on sake. The rhyming scheme fades in and out. It has a moral about optimism and dancing away one's troubles. I like it.
konk Comment by: konk - 2007-11-15 21:58
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i LOVE this poem...i want to print it out and read it every day! :)
nadinesellers Comment by: nadinesellers - 2007-11-15 20:01
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never went to kindergarten, wish i had.
you'll get richer than i writing this sort of poetry. submit, quick, before the kids grow up
jayster2788 Comment by: jayster2788 - 2007-11-15 19:44
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love it :) makes me feel like i'm 5 again
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