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7thSon
Seventh Son
United Kingdom

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Is It A Crime

Is It A Crime




Looking down from the towering stilts
Insipid, dusty, constant drudgery and it stinks
Fever pitch in the cities with all the commuter links
Every day communities and patriotism further sinks
Society today nudging, nudging to the brink.


To want from life simple pleasures
A constant endeavour in search of great treasure
Longing for more time in the pursuit of leisure
Living life to the full, measure for measure
Over indulgence sometimes, not never
Realms of academia striving to be clever
Divorce, marriage is not always forever
Evolving, perhaps alone or together
Restraints, rules, regulations, constant pressure

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tjnelson Comment by: tjnelson - 2007-12-16 09:39
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Good poem. Reflecting, for me, society's constant search for reason and the why's of its existence. It is sometimes hard to separate hedonistic from 'relaxating'.
Pollaxe Comment by: Pollaxe - 2007-11-16 03:20
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To be honest I was never a fan of poetry - I just couldn't understand the point. That is, until I came to EditRed and started to read some of the amazing poetry on this website. This being one of them, great work man.
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