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Jam1son33
James D'Ambrosio
United States, New York, Amityville

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Water World

Drips, drops, trickling spout.
Lathered in foam, sing and jump about!
Soapy, bubbly, dancing toes,
Floating, soaking, curtain closed.
Swim in the sea or play in the rain,
Bathe, shower, O, sparkling drain!

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Comment by: - 2008-07-07 14:00
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I argee that this is a cute poem it made my laugh and I don't know why, u are very creative with the words you use!
~Becca
theorionfive Comment by: theorionfive - 2007-11-28 13:07
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This is a cute little poem! I think this would be good for a Disney movie and all. Either that or perhaps you could tell me how I could sing this in the shower myself.
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