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Cheers for the advice, it is much appreciated.
I'll be having a read of your work this evening, looking forward to it after the last one. |
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| I would say it depends on the audience. This site’s for adults, far as I know. Most would knock the last line off for the kiddies. :) |
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A big thank you to everyone for the comments, they're a real help.
I'm at a bit of a quandary as to whether to drop the last line? ('you ignorant prick')
Michael Rosen was good enough to read this and advised on dropping it, however everyone else seems to like it. Decisions decisions! |
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| This was just after the toad witnessed a naughty child kicking a can wasn't it? Forget that, lol... I like the humour here, thumbs up. ~T |
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| Yep made me laugh! Do another.... |
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