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esthermorey
Esther Morey
United States, FL, Fort Myers

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Farewell

As we say our goodbyes my heart can only ache
To know that this was only a mistake

I don’t know why my heart was cursed
I only know that for you it hurts

I look at those last words of our farewell
And know that I could only wish you well

It was not meant for our love to share
To have and to hold we bid our farewell

I must move on
This I know
I need to be one
Complete and whole

I don’t know how I will ever make it
Know that my heart has been forsaken

Cleaning out my closet
That is what it is called
I will take every item that holds a bond
Remove it till all the pain is gone

I will set you free

Break all the chains

Take a deep breathe

Forget the pain

One step at a time you will be gone,
As bid our farewell in this early dawn

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Aiyana Comment by: Aiyana - 2008-02-20 09:10
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I really enjoy your writing. This expresses the true feeling of loving someone and that love being rejected and having to deal with that. Well done!
lucy Comment by: lucy - 2007-11-16 13:46
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I agree, very good. again, heartfelt and real- I feel the pain. The stages of lost love.
EnigmaticSoul Comment by: EnigmaticSoul - 2007-11-16 13:33
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This is so touching and beautiful! The emotion in this piece is very effective. A wonderful piece of writing! This is one of your best in my opinion.
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