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DaveyBoyGreen
David Cromby
United Kingdom, Harold Newman's World, Liverpool

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He Has An X-Ray Appointment Tomorrow

I have a son of seven
who breaks my heart
he doesn’t know
why it’s only me now
his dad
each night
to tuck him up and kiss his cheek
since his mum left us.
He has an x-ray appointment tomorrow
wouldn’t that be a time
to have a loving mum
next to you?


I have a son of ten
who is beauty
silent beauty
what swims in his mind
but his love for me
I don’t know
my tears for him are regular and silent
as he.
He was asked in school to talk in assembly
of family love
what a time for
a loving mum that would be.


I have a son one score less six
who is strength
and bubbles of teenage fight
to change the world
with untainted ideals
and navy blue converse pumps
to carry him
to his greatest height.
He has a presentation soon that I’ll cry at
for his skill
and determination
what a time for the hugs
of a loving mum.

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John Glennon Comment by: John Glennon - 2007-12-10 08:34
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speaking as a father this rigns many bells with me. Beautifully written
brokenpoet Comment by: brokenpoet - 2007-12-01 10:24
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This is a very heart-felt and beautifully written poem... the power of children is amazing, and they're too pure to know the power they have over their parents. I enjoyed this poem a lot.
DaveyBoyGreen Comment by: DaveyBoyGreen - 2007-11-19 06:19
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true poem....x-ray looks ok
thanks
JoanneMitch37 Comment by: JoanneMitch37 - 2007-11-19 06:15
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Is this a true poem?
How did the x-ray go if so?
Hugs.
JM
aprilmayed Comment by: aprilmayed - 2007-11-18 17:21
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"my tears for him are regular and silent as he." This was an eloquent and touching poem. Thanks for sharing.
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