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Welcome To Our Collective World
Vague fears haunt the spaces between ears, pooling behind eyelids in foggy gray patches.
Yeah! Into the valley of loneliness, we cultivate distortion in the mirror of self,
watching a somnambulistic smile turn into a painful grin.
Long hope, now measured by the distance between desolate wish and desperate reality.
Loveless leaders parade on our screens, selling cheap ideas, at the high cost of war.
Security sneaks behind obscure laws in the dark veins of self serving ambitions.
Disconnected appointees run the well oiled machine that runs the alienated.
Long hours of labor turn into lives ill spent for low wages.
Medicine becomes panacea for the rich, addiction to the poor.
Keep the mule alive and ye shall go far into concentric neurosis!
The sum-total of dead virtues litter our polluted sea-beds.
The good are good and tired of repeating incestuous history.
The industrious produce a great excess of obscene waste.
Kindness has become liberal weakness in the halls of rhetorica.
Reporting jargon drowns in logorrheic oceans of blame.
Brave means savage, strong means blatantly silent.
Family equals excuse, while child is but a number.
Daily despair drives the righteous to kill the very killers of their own morality,
in the death row of oblivion.
Like a ball of writhing worms in a prison toilet bowl, dirty conscience mingles in collective nihilism.
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Comment by: rosiewolf Online- 2007-11-29 14:55
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| Gosh Nadine! This is wonderful...as I'm always saying, I'm not that great at the poetry thing, but you have some very powerful images here. Thanks for commenting on the blog!...tis appreciated. |
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mclascu, of course i dipped into your brain, how do you think i got those lines?
welcome to our collective inspiration. |
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Comment by: mclascu - 2007-11-27 10:33
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| "Brave means savage, strong means blatantly silent." Truth hurts. It's as if you dipped into my brain, gathered the concerns I am not able to articulate and made sense of it. |
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| it is rewarding to notice that readers actually emote and intuit. i am grateful for your insight. |
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| Now I'm depressed (just kidding). Because it was so powerful ringing with elements of truth, screaming realism. The "yeah" part seemd to come off as sarcasm to me, seemed to fit, like, "Yeah! Can't wait to get into that loneliness!" |
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