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haliphax
Todd .
United States, Missouri

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taste the surface

hazel gazing into green eyes
lips are whispering wishes
for this gentle night's surprise
fingertips are tracing faces
building up as pulses rise
in the half-sleep
of intentions to keep
and only this moment applies

wrapped in arms.

free of lies.

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sarra Comment by: sarra - 2007-11-26 02:58
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This is just gorgeous! A fine piece of writing.
Danahfaren Comment by: Danahfaren - 2007-11-19 05:29
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Beautiful! Touching! Good job!
EnigmaticSoul Comment by: EnigmaticSoul - 2007-11-19 01:30
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Very beautiful piece of writing. You have captured some wonderful emotions and feelings here. Very nice!
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