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days dive,
then-
((crash)!)
into nigh(day)ts
(sun)
light(ened!)
(dis)
solves
(to)
nothing:
( daytime (me)...
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This needs to be one of your top three. Go to edit it and simply put a space after "..." and it will bring it to the top. Great job, I always thought you read too much cummings. I wonder how long this took.
"Light solves nothing" how wonderful!
