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drchase
dante cox
United States, new york, newburgh

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Compared

Compared

i hit a homer...while some havent hit they're first bunt

im ballin...most cudnt even make the first cut

if u ever try to compare to something...reconsider

im like a 3 course meal...no TV dinner

im not slap on the wrist...im a life time sentence

no hooptie...imma drop top..the sky is the limit

no atari...im like a ps3...time is infinite

imma permanant stain...greasy...bloody...grime intended

i got time on my hand...never mind that

no rolex on the wrist...flavor flav chain...u'll never find that

im behind the scenes like Batman...fightin crime back

no Ninja Turtle...im The Flash...there in no time flat

HDTV...plasma...if u will

toaster oven...indeed....George Foreman Grill

if u compare me to anything its prolly newer than ancient

u compare me to anything but dont compare me to greatness

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Rachel Escott Comment by: Rachel Escott - 2007-11-27 04:34
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I like it - you're good where you are, feel good about yourself.

"reconsider

im like a 3 course meal...no TV dinner"

and the permanent stain bit - vivid
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