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ruredernot
andrew spaschak
United States, New York, niskayusa

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Karma

Oh, timeless is the whipping wind
that brings on fast a Godly sin
when in step we walk astray
karma bleeds the day to gray
for what we leave along our paths
shall surely find its own way back


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Vision79 Comment by: Vision79 - 2008-07-10 11:07
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Very good
Bbounty1 Comment by: Bbounty1 - 2008-01-24 02:06
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Very Cool. " Karma" could be used as a very cool verse in a song!
sophen01 Comment by: sophen01 - 2007-11-21 15:52
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I love the flow. I love the word usage. It's surely a new twist to the 'Karma' poem. :)
Nice work, actually great work!
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