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Silver Blood
Silver Blood
United States, Kansas, Hutchinson

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Hollow

widows web
connect connect
widows dead
reverse effect

you find my freind in sweet eden
waiting for the fall
my freinds a bit more of a creten
nothing but a weaving doll

widows web
the intraped wail
widows dead
the hollows hell

carven with the wise mans knife
my little spiders bed
now all thats left, a hole for mice
empty yet made of lead

widows web
sparsely littered
widows dead
the thoughts now bitter

gazing through the hollow
i saw my reasoning why
yet saddened by nothing left to follow
and all that that implys

widows web
a lie a lie
widows dead
shes now the fly

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jesscat Comment by: jesscat - 2008-02-18 12:13
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beautiful. over my head, but dead gorgeous.
Dakota Comment by: Dakota - 2008-01-28 09:51
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Gorgeous. Dark and light - lovely rhythm - wonderful pictures riven.
I really like your poetry.
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe - 2007-12-07 04:33
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Hi, silver blood, I like your poem very much, for you wrote it in a wonderful style. May you be happy!
Mrs Woolf Comment by: Mrs Woolf Online- 2007-11-26 14:18
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Beautiful, thanks for sharing this! :]

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