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sudipal
Chana Lapidus
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Odd

Where is it? Somewhere around here. Maybe I'm lost. In the Land of the Lost. Ha ha ha. Odd; I never even watched that show and I immediately thought of it. I mean, I could have thought about Lost in Space; though, I'm not in space. I could have said Lost. That season finale was really freaky. I wonder what will happen in the season opener? When is the season opener?

Oh, there it is!

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poetichues Comment by: poetichues - 2007-11-23 08:17
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I love this little piece! Well done. :)
Ash19640 Comment by: Ash19640 - 2007-11-22 12:22
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Yeowch-- lost in TV Land. I liked the references and especially the confused voice you're using here. Spaced out. This was very enjoyable, I read it a couple of times. It also has a definite and deliberate rhythm that sounds great read out loud. Cheers Ash :)
karjon Comment by: karjon Online- 2007-11-22 08:14
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The rambling thoughts of one person - are they odd? To the rest of us, yes - but we all make these mad wee connections in our heads when we are thinking, so they sense to the thinker. Don't we? What do you man, 'No, it's just you, Karen'?

Good one, Chana - enjoyed this take on the title.


Cheers

Karen
easywriter58 Comment by: easywriter58 - 2007-11-21 18:23
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Then there is "The Lost World". Seems like someone in this passage is certainly losing 'it' whatever it may be. Neat little story.
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