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Abi Corzo
Abi Corzo
United Kingdom, GUILDFORD

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DAWNING.

DAWNING

How calm, how wonderful is the hour
just before dawn.
The world seems at peace in her
beauteous solitude…
At this hour;
The pain of Mother Earth and her
children, are far removed from the mind,
Only God’s gentleness, nature’s greatness,
Are felt, smelt, tasted and touched.
Yet alas! Day breaks just after
dawn’s chorus. Melodious, delicious,
a new morning, a new dawning.
A warning.
Man’s inhumanity to man – hah! An
understatement of the evils and perils,
of beasts perpetrating to be in
God’s image, God’s name. The shame.
the vanity of it all. The audacity,
hypocrisy, derogatory, inappropriate
behaviour. Where is our Saviour.

© Abi C. 2002

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Comment by: - 2007-11-24 08:08
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The imagery is interesting...you painted a view with words. The ending is tough but it is real.
jaygray Comment by: jaygray - 2007-11-22 21:54
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I agree with Amber you're very talented, nice combination of words
amber3212 Comment by: amber3212 - 2007-11-21 16:34
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wow. that's really good. u have great potential as a writer. u could go far. well, i'm kinda new to this site, and i'm tryin 2 get some readers. i would really appreciate it if you could take a second and go to my profile and read my poem and short story. i thought your poem was well written. you're a great writer, and i wish you the best of luck, because i think you could go far.
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