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Perhaps I may be being too harsh.
Perhaps I may be being too much to ...handle
Perhaps I may be being too much, so much that one wants to just kill.
And or perhaps I am just trying to express myself clearly enough to you that ...well...read between the lines figure it all out. I will repeat myself again until you finally believe this.
"Even When all hope seems lost...And there is no place to hinder to and find comfort..Know this I will be here for you.. Not a day goes by I don't think about whether or not You are or are not doing okay... I love you. Just believe it.
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Is this meant to read like a poem? It struck me as poetic though a little verbose eg. 'I may be being,' and 'You are or are not doing'.
Keep writing :)
