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mynamelez
Leslie Blackwell
New Zealand, Wellington

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Karjon Challenge 19 – The Island

It is lunchtime and the beach is crowded. A helicopter grants tourists a bird's eye view of the Island.

Water-taxis dock. Buses collect the new arrivals and head into the congested township where horns blast. Multilingual cursing fills the air.

Intoxicated patrons quarrel in the pubs and relinquish their fortunes at Balmy’s Casino.

I like to get away from the hustle and bustle of metropolis and come to the serenity of Tranquility Island.

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DrCarter2001 Comment by: DrCarter2001 - 2007-12-01 14:47
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Haha sounds like you've had some unsucessful getaways; reminds me of Waikiki. Maybe come up with a more subtle name though than "Quiet Island". Maybe something like "Serenity Island".
karjon Comment by: karjon Online- 2007-11-27 04:22
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Ah - Quiet Island, where the tourists have turned it into something slightly worse than Metropolis.

Very good, Les.

Cheers

Karen
Stratus Comment by: Stratus - 2007-11-26 06:32
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Nice work, the clever wordplay finishing the piece made me chuckle.

Thanks -
lucy Comment by: lucy - 2007-11-25 08:07
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I want to be where they are, touring, vacation, relaxing. Nicely done! Great piece.
cantrall Comment by: cantrall - 2007-11-23 15:07
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I was confused until I figured out the ironic, bittersweet sarcasm at the end
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