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forsakenfailure
Alanna Dale
United States, NC

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Porque

"Three words," you say,
"and why must you throw them
around and around
so carelessly,
pennies to a well?"


Please understand, querida,
that I do not know what love is,
could never grasp the citric sting,
the irony of locusts
that is this cobwebbed word.
I do not know what I mean exactly
when I tell you how I love you.


But explain to me this:
Why then, querida,
do my lungs quicken
upon the defiant incline of your head
when you hook my breath
with upturned lips?
Why then
do I inhale so deeply
when you pass beside me,
so that I might catch an
afterthought of you?
Why then
do my fingertips throb,
explode,
technicolor in your elliptical gaze,
when static must leap between
the tongue and teeth of secrets?


Querida,
I still do not know what love is,
not here in my prison of alone,
where three words are as hungered for
as an embrace on snowfall nights -
not here where I cannot
feel and taste and breathe you
and yet remember
why I answer such ridiculous questions.

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Glen aka FAD Comment by: Glen aka FAD - 2007-12-15 00:09
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Descriptive in the language that protrays in the verse... Very well spoken in terms of the 3 words...


Glen Yumang Manese
Louise Comment by: Louise - 2007-11-23 06:55
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Oh I like this, so alive and vibrant and yet so melancholy and soft. The choice of "querida" adds extra potency as even this pet name sums up the status of the subject of the poem, nicely done. Thank you for the read :)
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