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Miss Kitty
Sahar F.
United States

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Turpitude

I entered reality today with hands
that don’t grip so well anymore.
Blue, papery blue veins;
I feel so perpetually cold.

My face throws itself to the water,
to breathe, to become,
a nymph who has forgotten her place
in the world.
So bitter I refuse to move,
from my steaming lie of an oasis.

I’d like to think that
to need, and to run
into dark, sullen glass
is more shame than virtue
but then my oblivion couldn’t say

“misery is quite provocative.”

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dannykurl Comment by: dannykurl - 2007-11-24 01:42
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anyone who can write this must be very interesting

very nice
aprilmayed Comment by: aprilmayed Online- 2007-11-23 13:52
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I really loved this line...

"My face throws itself to the water"

You have beautiful imagery and an intriguing message.

Thanks for sharing!
forsakenfailure Comment by: forsakenfailure - 2007-11-23 09:13
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This was a beautiful write - I loved the phrase "paper blue veins", and the sudden change in mood with the third stanza's "I'd like to think that..."

Thanks for the great read!
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