Second Frost Haiku
Autumn, the bent necks
of Vinca, the blue-gray weight
of vast snowless skies.
Vinca: aka Periwinkle
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Beautiful :) Thanks for explaining the Vinca...pretty periwinkle! The weather carries such emotion, something i've only realised since writing more poetry.
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| A good form for the sentiment. Works, of course, on multiple levels. If only there was a two beat adjective for skies that implied the snow was coming. |
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